We showcased our film on Thursday. Teachers & students gave us feedback on our movie. In general, the feedback was good but the main problems were that people did not understand who was trying to be killed & there was no main character. They also said it lacked narrative progression.
In order to improve on these things, we have tried to make it more clear about who is going to be killed by showing the image of the man more frequently & ending the sequence with a photograph of him with the word 'KILL' next to it. This should make it more clear for the audience to understand. I have also used more shots with the character in it so people can see him, however we do not want to give away who our character is because we want him to be mysterious. This will add to the suspense of the film.
In order to create more narrative progression, i showed the shot of the man in a shadow playing with hair, so people can see the character in the beginning of the film.
Once this was done we had to export it into garage band & move our sounds so they fit in with the new sequence. This has been a success & i believe we have now finished our opening sequence.
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